Class 4

[davidn]

Class four! This is notably the longest one so far, totalling just over one hour of running time. It falls rather neatly into three parts, though - One's revelation and the reason for the dome being there, finding out more in the lab and the library, and breaking into the abandoned medical centre. And I feature in very little of it! In fact I think I've temporarily overtaken poor budgiebin, who hasn't had many lines due to a bout of deadness - but I'm going to get to more than make up for this later on.

And in part 4-2, it features the first part in this entire project that has required absolutely no editing whatsoever!

4-1: The Power of One

3:45 Leone JB
4:50 Secret
5:30 reallybelievethat
6:50 Spontaneous combustion
7:45 Criteria
11:55 Eating away at the system
12:25 War
14:00 The time is always...
14:55 Ryouta/Sakuya
17:20 Incomprehensible

4-2: Run back to the library

3:40 Out of the ordinary/Paradox
4:30 Yuuya!
5:55 Not yet
7:35 Bad joke contribution
9:50 Nageki
10:30 Yup.
10:50 Translation breakdown
11:20 Airplane
12:35 Ghost money
14:20 Mybae
16:30 Numberblind
18:50 A ghost...
19:10 Tu dis des balivernes!
19:45 Limits

4-3: The medical centre and a whole new variety of what the heck are you talking about!

1:15 Exasperated Sakuya
2:30 Suspended
3:20 Windows
3:35 Background
4:40 Beakplant
5:25 Black hole
6:10 Numbers/encyclopaedia
7:50 Yes
9:20 Cut this
10:05 Contractor
10:50 Beak injury
11:10 Sound effect/ringtone
12:20 The Crimson Fallen Angel
12:35 Nutcase
13:15 Who likes me?
14:00 FIGHT!
16:15 You!
16:35 Complete line breakdown
18:40 With Steve
19:30 Struggle for normality

Comments

[ravenworks.livejournal.com]

Man, this is so dumb, but I had actually forgotten *why* Yuuya was in cahoots with the doctor until we got to that part, and now that I'm watching him be all evasive in 4-2.... I would have read that all so differently if I'd known how desperate he was not to have his cover blown.... I was operating under the impression that he was working with the doctor because he was a double-agent, and he was secretly *hoping* that they'd catch on, but of course he couldn't say so in case the doctor was listening in.... gah.

[kjorteo]

I guess I don't really have room to judge anyone else's "I so would have read that differently in hindsight" regrets, because one of the reason I wanted this group to assemble and do BBL in the first place was so that I could finally get a second chance at Sakuya's Khan-esque "YUUUYAAAAAAAA" at the end of their climactic scene, which I read by yelling it more loudly but not extending it at all, but then always wishing I had. So, you know, I understand!

However, if it makes you feel any better, I, for one, think your delivery here actually still works fairly well even as it currently stands--I see it as him using his playful flirty mode itself as the mask. Like "Er ... >_> noo, I have no idea what you could possibly be talking about, cutie. Don't mind me, saunter, saunter. ;3" It still works with the hindsight and all. You did a good job, I think!

[davidn]

That's a very... specific thing to want to correct! But we really are all getting into it this time around... having had something of a comical part, my only regret when editing is that I just keep on seeing lines that could have been added to Kazuaki's speech ("Thank you for being with Teo now." "Ooh, not to worry - she's stone dead, doesn't need much taking care of at all.") - but I'm going to have my turn at two very different emotions with him next time!

[davidn]

I'm finding that I'd forgotten... absolutely everything about the storyline of this game - everything's like a new surprise to me this time. I think that my brain must have just stopped, when we watched Kjorteo go through the last stages.

[ravenworks.livejournal.com]

Okay, I feel better about having forgotten it if I'm not the only one ;) It is a rather topsy-turvy storyline! :P